I like having a female protagonist, and Dana Strange is pretty good, but did you have to give her a partner who sits around in the office and then says "we did so well"? Mal stinks. Do better next time.
When I encounter decidedly old-fashioned settings (no CUSTOM) and at least twelve typos in the first five minutes of play, I can't possibly go any further. I also found the art style really ugly. Ugh.